Today we learned the step to development an essay. We chose a theme an everybody gave their ideas. First we thought about "fat people." Finally, our Claim was: "Kean University is better than Rutgers." We wrote down some topics about what our paper would be. Some patterns that our professor taught talked about were: That we can describe or narrate, make comparison. In any case we have to give as much examples as we can.
This class was OK., but I think we needed to be more prepared for this class. We talked about many aspects the the universities should be measure but we forgot to mention that the students are a very important part of that measure. If the student are demanding the professor has to give more. But if the professor is trying to teach and the students are trying to just past the class it is going to be a negative consecuence.